阿邱 发表于 2013-5-14 16:41:41

Feeling in Snow

s soon as I walked outside, I was greeted with the shimmering white blanket of cold. Despite the chill overwhelming my skin, inside I was warm. I felt as though I could be giving off heat; I had the desire to stay out in this freeze for hours. It was the type of day that speaks to you through its elements; I took a deep breath to hear more snow was coming. As I walked I looked up, trying to realize what made this day so beautiful, so serene. It was as if time had been put temporarily on hold and I along with it. Or maybe I was the only one unpaused…Either way, the solitude was comforting, and I sensed myself floating away. I sat down on the edge of a curb and listened. All there was to hear was the wind rushing over the top of my head and circling some old, cracking leaves some yards away. To me it was the reassuring sound of nature, trying not to be forgotten. It did start to snow. None of those little flurries, but big, fat flakes which clung immediately to their surface. Then it was time to go and my reverie had to end. As I began walking again, I drifted back into this time frame, calm and cleared. Now if only I could remember where I was going.

阿邱 发表于 2013-5-14 16:42:45

雪天随想  刚出门,便扑面而来一大片晶莹雪白的冰凉。冷气袭来,肌肤阵阵战栗,而内心却温暖如初。觉得自己似乎能发热,因而渴望在这寒冷中长时间驻足。这是一个大自然与你交流的日子。我深深地吸了一口气,静听雪花飘落,源源不绝。  漫步雪中,举目四顾,我努力思索是什么竟然能够把这一天变得如此美丽和宁静。那一刻,时间仿佛静止了,而我也定在其中。或者,只有我一个人在前行……  无论如何,这种孤寂却令人欣慰。我仿佛脱离了尘世。坐在路边,仔细聆听。只有风从头顶掠过,卷走几码远的干枯树叶。在我心中,这是大自然给人安慰、令人难忘的声音。  真的下雪了!不是零星小雪,而是鹅毛大雪,一落地就凝结在一起了。  该结束沉思离开了!我举步前行时,思绪又转回到现实中来,而此时感觉如此平静,如此清新。  我实在记不得我要往何处去了!

medmanxin 发表于 2013-5-19 11:25:48

本帖最后由 medmanxin 于 2013-5-19 12:07 编辑

也试着翻译,班门弄斧,贻笑大方
只是试试自己国文功底而已

Feeling in Snow
As soon as I walked outside, I was greeted with the shimmering white blanket of cold. Despite the chill overwhelming my skin, inside I was warm. I felt as though I could be giving off heat; I had the desire to stay out in this freeze for hours. It was the type of day that speaks to you through its elements; I took a deep breath to hear more snow was coming.
As I walked I looked up, trying to realize what made this day so beautiful, so serene. It was as if time had been put temporarily on hold and I along with it. Or maybe I was the only one unpaused…Either way, the solitude was comforting, and I sensed myself floating away. I sat down on the edge of a curb and listened. All there was to hear was the wind rushing over the top of my head and circling some old, cracking leaves some yards away. To me it was the reassuring sound of nature, trying not to be forgotten.
It did start to snow. None of those little flurries, but big, fat flakes which clung immediately to their surface.
Then it was time to go and my reverie had to end. As I began walking again, I drifted back into this time frame, calm and cleared.
Now if only I could remember where I was going.

雪中遐想
打开门,迎面是满眼晶莹雪白的冰凉。寒意袭我肌肤,内心热度不减。我要成为火把,融进这冰冻的世界。这是能与自然呢喃的时日。我深吸一口气,想听见雪花飘落的声音。
信步四顾,是谁造就了这些美妙,这些清澈?时光似已暂停,令我依恋。或也许,只有我独步前行,……然而孤独却让人欣喜,我已逃离尘世。我就路边坐下聆听,只听见风从头顶掠过,卷走身边破碎的枯叶。这是大自然的低吟,我试图铭记。
真的下雪了!不是零星小雪,而是鹅毛大雪,厚实的鳞片层叠凝结。
我不得不停止遐想。时光随步履重新开始流动,如此平静,如此清晰。
只是此时,我实在记不起我要往何处去。

medmanxin 发表于 2013-5-28 12:58:59

独步寒凉心绪敞,飘雪缤纷妙音藏。
舒曼枯叶丹青画,绰约天籁忘归郎。
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